Friday, January 22, 2016
My favorite place I would love to go has many warm sandy beaches. Its occasionally cool in the winter time but still ranges from 80-85 degrees. Many visitors come to watch the wales, swim with the colorful fishes, and do the hula in grass skirts. Most sit on the warm beaches to watch the vibrant sunsets with drinking cold drinks while absorbing as much sun light as possible. This place is a very bright and happy place. It has many varieties of fruit stands and crazy foods to try as well. As you walk on the beaches feeling the sand between your toes it becomes a relaxation. Shopping malls left and right as well as endless souvenir shops. When you arrive at this location, all your worries and stress begins to disappear.
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I think you have a good start in describing your favorite place, but expand on the details. Show vs. tell type details. Show details use elaborative, specific details that heighten the senses and paint a specific image to the reader.
ReplyDeleteHawaii was the place that I was thinking of. I felt like I was on a beach and drinking a fruity beverage watching the sun set. I like this picture you started in my head.
ReplyDeleteTo me this place felt like Cancun in Mexico. When I visited last year.
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